Writing Preview [EDITED]

WRITING PREVIEW
by Sunspot
Hey all! Sunspot here with another little preview of what's coming up next. This is just a sample of the type of writing that will be featured within the chapters, and will not reflect the content of the chapters themselves. Before I begin, I'd also like to point out that the actual writing style between drafts will differ dramatically and it will become more comprehensive as our editors piece them together. Now, without further hesitation, please enjoy. Orion gazed out of the treetops haphazardly. This was not good. What he saw was worse than the average predator or even the usual amount of whining, lost travelers.  The machine clanged loudly. BOOM. BOOM. BOOM. The whirring grew steadily louder.  Staring, he puffed his cheeks slightly. He wasn't expecting the titan to come so soon this year. Turing around, he quickly scrabbled around the thick tree branches. There's too much to do. Too many animals to move, too many consequences... Looking up to the summit of the tree, he licked one of his eyes clean. He had to move.  "But my family's up there," he thought. When he looked back at the toppling trees, however, he knew he had one choice. Tears welling up in his eyes, tail twitching nervously, he backed down the tree. Pushing off the edge, crawling to the very end of the small patch of rainforest that was left, he heard a crash, and didn't turn back. Well, that's it. A rough preview, indeed, but a preview nonetheless. Have a fantastic day, ~Icey QOTD: What do you think of this passage?